Common proofreading marks
Notation |
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Descriptions
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Revision
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Box around coordinating
conjunction at the beginning of a sentence |
Sentence Fragment |
Sentence
started with a coordinating conjunction “He
was up all night. And he wasn’t very tired.” |
a.
Remove coordinating conjunction; capitalize as
needed “He
wasn’t very tired.” b.
Drop case of coordinating conjunction and link to
previous sentence if applicable “He
was up all night and he wasn’t very tired.” |
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“C.S.” located near a circled
comma |
Comma Splice |
Two
or more independent clauses connected by a comma: “We
went to the game, we had a good time.” |
a.
Add coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS) after
comma (either retaining or removing comma) “We
went to the game, and we had a good time.” b.
Remove comma and insert period “We
went to the game. We had a good time.” c.
Remove comma and insert semi-colon (perhaps followed by conjunctive
adverb and a comma) “We
went to the game; indeed, we had a good time.” |
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Paragraph Mark |
1.
New paragraph not yet indented 2.
Suggested place for new paragraph |
Indent
one tab to the right |
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Sentence Fragment |
Square
brackets surrounding a phrase or a dependent clause posing
as a complete sentence Ex.1.
“Leaving before the show ended.” Ex.2.
“The guy with the brown hair.” |
a.
Use current verb
and add a subject
and appropriate auxiliary verb Ex.1.
“They were leaving before the show ended.” b.
Use current phrase as the subject and add a verb Ex.1.
“Leaving before the show ended caused them to miss your part.” Ex.2.
“The guy with the brown hair asked me out.” c.
Use current phrase as the object and add a subject and verb
either before or after Ex.1.
“They hated leaving before the show ended.” Ex.2.
“I went out with the guy with the brown hair.” Ex.1.
“Leaving before the show ended, they didn’t see your part.” |
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“Fused”located near two
consecutive circled words |
Fused Sentence |
Two
or more consecutive independent clauses without any
punctuation: “We
went to the game we had a good time.” |
a.
Add a coordinating conjunction between the end of
the first independent clause and the beginning of the
second (with or without a comma before the conjunction) “We
went to the game, and we had a good time.” b. Add a period at the end of the first independent clause and capitalize the next word as the beginning of a new sentence “We
went to the game. We had a good time.” c.
Insert semi-colon
(perhaps followed by conjunctive adverb and
a comma) “We
went to the game; indeed, we had a good time.” |
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? “unclear” “awkward” |
Coherence |
Sentence
construction is not easily understandable |
Revise
as necessary |
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Line connecting circled subject and circled verb s/v |
Agreement |
Related
subject
and verb
must agree in number Ex.1.
“They goes to school on the bus.” |
a.
Change the verb
to agree with the subject “They
go to school on the bus.” b.
Change the subject
to agree with the verb “He
goes to school on the bus.” |
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Line connecting circled pronoun
and circled antecedent
p/a |
Agreement |
Related
pronoun
and antecedent
must agree in (a.) person and (b.) number Ex.1.
“When a person comes to class, you should have your homework
ready.” Ex.2.
“Everyone needs to bring their books to school.” |
a.
Change the pronoun
to agree in person with the antecedent Ex.1.
“When a person comes to class, he or she should have his
homework ready.” b.
Change the pronoun
to agree in number with the antecedent Ex.
2. “Everyone needs to bring his or her books to school.” |
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“POV”Line connecting pronouns
in related sentences |
Point of View |
Narrative
voice switches illogically among 1st, 2nd, or 3rd
person point of view “Students
receive so much homework and you don’t know how to handle it.” |
Change
the pronouns
so they are in agreement “Students
receive so much homework and they don’t know how to handle it.” |
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“TS”
located near line
connecting two or more circled verbs |
Tense Shift |
Verb
tense switches illogically among past, present or future “I
walked into the room and take a seat.” |
Change
the verbs
so they logically agree in tense “I
walked into the room and took a seat.” |
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“Case”
written above circled pronoun |
Pronoun Case |
Subjective
or objective pronoun
case used incorrectly “He
brought his car for she and I to use.” |
Change
the pronoun
so the correct case is used “He
brought his car for her and me to use.” |
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Transposition line
identifying a word located between “to” and the base verb form |
Split Infinitive Verb |
A
word appeared inappropriately within an infinitive verb form “She
seemed to quickly take her seat.” |
Relocate
the word either in front of the infinitive verb phrase or closer
to the end of the sentence “She
seemed quickly to take her seat.” “She
seemed to take her seat quickly.” |
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Line beneath single letter |
Capitalization |
1.
Incorrectly used capitalization 2.
Absent capitalization where needed “My
Mother bought me a toyota supra last Spring.” |
1.
Drop the capital letter and replace with lower case “My
mother bought me a Toyota Supra last spring.” |
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“DM”
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Dangling modifier |
Phrase
appears to modify the incorrect part of the sentence “Having
finished our work, the game was begun.” |
Change
the word or phrase being modified “Having
finished our work, we began to play a game.” |
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Circled comma |
Comma Usage |
Incorrect
or inappropriate comma usage |
Revise
as necessary |
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“Poss”
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Possessive Pronoun |
1.
Inappropriate spelling, punctuation, or use of a possessive pronoun “Since
I had no car, I borrowed thiers, but their’s isn’t as good as yours
car.” 2. Absence of possessive pronoun where needed “He
enjoyed you sharing some of that cake.” |
1.
Revise as necessary “Since
I had no car, I borrowed theirs, but theirs isn’t as good as your
car.” 2.
Insert as necessary “He
enjoyed your sharing some of that cake.” |
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( “ ” ) |
Quotation Marks |
1.
Incorrect or inappropriate use of quotation marks “Since
I’m finished, he said, I’ll help clean up.” 2.
Incorrect punctuation related to quotation marks “Since
I’m finished”, he said, “I’ll help clean up”. |
Revise
as necessary “Since
I’m finished,” he said, “I’ll help clean up.” |
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( ’ ) |
Apostrophe |
1.
Incorrect use of apostrophe for contraction or possession “She
did’nt have her own car, so she needed your’s.” |
Revise
as necessary “She
didn’t have her own car, so she needed yours.” |
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Semi-colon |
Incorrect
or inappropriate use of semi-colon “She
needed help; so she asked you.” |
Revise
as necessary “She
needed help, so she asked you.” |
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“WC”
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Word Choice |
Incorrect
or inappropriate word choice “His
car is more speedy than mine.” |
Revise
as necessary “His
car is speedier than mine.” |
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“Usage”
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Usage |
Incorrect
or inappropriate diction or usage “They’re
bed is to soft so I’m laying on the sofa.” |
Revise
as necessary “Their
bed is too soft so I’m lying on the sofa.” |
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( / ) |
Connected Words |
Incorrect
connection of two words into one “He
accidentally took apart of the game with him.” |
Separate
the word into its parts “He
accidentally took a part of the game with him.” |
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Arc connecting two consecutive
words |
Separated Word |
Incorrect
separation of one word into two or more parts “He
can join us when ever he would like.” |
Connect
the parts to form one word “He
can join us whenever he would like.” |
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“Redun”
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Redundancy |
Unnecessary repetition or restating of information “He
entered into the room.” |
Revise
as necessary “He
entered the room.” |
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“sp” |
Spelling |
Incorrect
spelling of a word “He
asked the secretery for assistence.” |
Revise
as necessary “He
asked the secretary for assistance.” |
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Definitions |
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The
subject of a clause is the thing or person that performs the action. |
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The
verb of a clause is the action performed by the subject. |
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The
object of a clause is the recipient or result of the action performed by the
subject. |
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A
word that is used in place of a noun or noun phrase. |
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That
word or phrase earlier in the sentence which the subsequent pronoun renames. |
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An
independent clause (IC) is a group of words that contains a subject and verb,
expressing a complete thought. An independent clause can exist as a sentence. |
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A
dependent clause (DC) is a group of words that may contain a subject and / or
a verb but does not express a complete thought. A dependent clause cannot be
a sentence. |
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A
coordinating conjunction joins two or more words, phrases or clauses of equal
rank. The seven coordinating conjunctions can be remembered easily with the
acronym FANBOYS: For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So |
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A
subordinating conjunction (also called a subordinator) is used at the
beginning of a subordinate clause (a clause that requires other information
to create a complete sentence). The subordinator establishes a relationship
between the dependent (subordinate) clause and the rest of the sentence.
Note: sometimes a word (such as “after”) can be both a subordinating
conjunction (“After we finish dinner, . . . ”) and a preposition (“After
dinner, . . . ”). |
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after |
because even though |
inasmuch as |
no matter how |
supposing [that] though |
until |
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A
conjunctive adverb is
an adverb that connects independent clauses. Often, but not always, they
require semi-colons. They can be confused with coordinating conjunctions. One
key distinction is that conjunctive adverbs do not necessarily join clauses
of equal rank. Also, conjunctive adverbs do not always serve as linking
devices, in that they can be used for emphasis: “I will not, however, give
you more money.” |
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also |
furthermore hence |
incidentally indeed likewise |
meanwhile moreover |
next nonetheless still |
then |
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Auxiliary
verbs or helping verbs are used with main verbs to express variations of time
and mood. The combination of auxiliary verbs with main verbs creates verb
phrases. |
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am is are was |
were have has had |
do does did can |
could shall should will |
would may might must |
ought to used to need to |
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